Developed Idea

After reviewing my idea's I have decided to make an advertisement for my village.
My village will be based around my personality and be my perfect place to live.
My village will include :-
- A library (going to be the biggest building)
- Various food outlets (food only I like)
- Telescopes situated through the village (all lights will be turned off for a certain amount of time every night so residents can star gaze)
- Outdoor cinemas (showing films and TV Series)
- Water parks (outdoor and indoor)
- Theme parks
- Soft play areas (adult size)
- Luxury Homes (variable sizes)
- Concerts/festivals (outdoors and indoors, at least 2 a week)
- PJ days (able to wear PJ's whenever you want, acceptable to go outside in them)
- Fancy dress days (at least once a week)
- Nightlife center
- Choice of stairs or slides in every building
- No money needed (all inclusive)

I want my village to sound luxurious and relaxing, it will be called Laville.

Opening line for advert -

"Are you fed up of your 9-5 job?
Do you wish it was always the weekend?
Then come to Laville
Where everyday is a lazy day."

I need my advert to sound convincing:

"Hi, Are you bored of your 9-5 job?
If thats a yes then come down to LaVille
Where we have luxury state of the art homes and the biggest library in the world
but what really makes LaVille so amazing is our lifestyle
We are the only place in the world that encourages you to wear your pyjamas everyday all day where ever you are
In every building your get the options of using stairs or slides
We have concerts, festivals, outdoor cinemas and star gazing nights
So join us in our ball pits, water parks and theme parks
Come to LaVille, Where every day is a you day"

Laville Slogan -

Where everyday is a lazy day.